Wed Nov 08, 2017 4:10 pm by bitbuster
Having never made a commercial, please take this with a grain of salt. Everything seems fine to me, but ...... turn music volume down just ever so slightly. I didn't make out all the words while she was on the phone. That may be attributed to old ears, too. Good job.
...Warm smell of colitas, rising up through the air... Eagles, Hotel California, 1976