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chieflittlehorse

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Post Tue Nov 07, 2017 8:17 am

Marketing Class Commercial

Hey guys, I made this commercial for a marketing class I took at a Jr. College.

Please give me your opinions on the commercial I made.

Was the music good? Did you understand the video?

Etc.

CLH!
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Post Wed Nov 08, 2017 2:23 am

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

is there a link here that I'm missing?
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Post Wed Nov 08, 2017 2:34 am

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

There is no link.
Innerpicked: The more keys you carry, the more important you look
GWiens2001: Great video! Learned a lot about what fun can be had with a forklift and a chainsaw.
pmaxey83: but i first have to submit the proper forms for a new hobby to my wife
xeo: i root for the kernel
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chieflittlehorse

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Post Wed Nov 08, 2017 6:41 pm

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

https://youtu.be/XHH2kWhOHqY

Sorry about that. Here's the missing link.
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Post Wed Nov 08, 2017 10:10 pm

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

Having never made a commercial, please take this with a grain of salt. Everything seems fine to me, but ...... turn music volume down just ever so slightly. I didn't make out all the words while she was on the phone. That may be attributed to old ears, too. Good job.
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Post Thu Nov 09, 2017 3:07 am

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

Nice commercial - one correction, you used the wrong 'YOUR' at the end - it should be "YOU'RE SAFE WITH US"
Innerpicked: The more keys you carry, the more important you look
GWiens2001: Great video! Learned a lot about what fun can be had with a forklift and a chainsaw.
pmaxey83: but i first have to submit the proper forms for a new hobby to my wife
xeo: i root for the kernel
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chieflittlehorse

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Post Thu Nov 09, 2017 9:20 am

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

Actually Jeff Moss, that is my slogan.

Your safe with us, that is until I sell it to you.

It's a play on words.

People do ask me on that and I have to explain it to them, then they're like, ohhhhh. :)

CLH!

PS: I saw some YouTube videos where people got tattoos with misspellings, that's permanent. :(
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Post Fri Nov 10, 2017 4:05 pm

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

I like it for the most part, If I could give a little advice, make it shorter,(as time is big money in advertising) and at the 40 second mark your van rolling in with the front bumper all scraped up looks bad. I think a voice over would work better than the sound track.

Good to see a lady locksmith attend a call out for a lady, that is a big selling point, not saying its only ladys that lock their keys in the car.(safe to post as my wife is never on here)
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Post Sun Nov 12, 2017 1:27 am

Re: Marketing Class Commercial

Youll want to be sure the background music is not under copyright. Otherwise you could end up getting scored badly in your class or having your video taken down by youtube.

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCht8qI ... sR1Byln-wA
heres a youtube channel of copyright free music, some sounds cheesy, but theres some good music too.

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